This week for day 2, activity 2 of week 1 for SLJ, We created a poem about what it might fell like to be Neil Armstrong walking on the moon and what is might have been lke.
I was lucky enough to come visit your school 2 weeks ago. Your school was awesome. The people are so lovely and welcoming. I actually have a post up on my blog when me and Jordan came to visit your school, you should check it out and tell your peers that the group photo is on my blog. As you may of already gathered Im a blog commenter for the Summer Learning journey, in fact It’s my second year doing this! I have just completed my degree in teaching.
I love this poem that you have created, you really must have given this some thought. My favourite part of your poem is ‘as I put a flag on, I felt the swag on’. What’s your favourite part of your poem? I also want to congratulate you on your photo attribution. This means that you will get full marks for your post- kai pai!
Keep up the awesome mahi. I can’t wait to read more of your blog posts.
Hi Taheesha!, Wow! You have a interesting and enjoyable poem to read. It looks like you have put a lot of effort into this poem. Your poem really rhymes which is great. I like how you have explained what you did for this Summer Learning Journey activity. If you had the chance to walk on the moon, would you?
Kia Ora Taheesha! You've made a great start on the Summer Learning Journey, and I'm glad to see you taking part in the programme for the first time. You did really good on this poem and made it rhyme. I liked the picture as well, although it's small, attribution goes a long way. If you could take one other person with you to the moon, who would it be and why?
Hi Taheesha, I liked how you described how you felt, and what you did on the moon with lots of detail. I found it interesting that you felt swag after putting a flag down. If you could actually go to the moon would you want to?
Kia ora Taheesha,
ReplyDeleteI was lucky enough to come visit your school 2 weeks ago. Your school was awesome. The people are so lovely and welcoming. I actually have a post up on my blog when me and Jordan came to visit your school, you should check it out and tell your peers that the group photo is on my blog. As you may of already gathered Im a blog commenter for the Summer Learning journey, in fact It’s my second year doing this! I have just completed my degree in teaching.
I love this poem that you have created, you really must have given this some thought. My favourite part of your poem is ‘as I put a flag on, I felt the swag on’. What’s your favourite part of your poem? I also want to congratulate you on your photo attribution. This means that you will get full marks for your post- kai pai!
Keep up the awesome mahi. I can’t wait to read more of your blog posts.
Nga mihi,
Georgia
Thank you my favourite is also how I said as I put the flag on I felt the swag on Too. Thank you
DeleteAwesome! Have you shown your peers your poem? It will be awesome if you take a look at each others :) Thanks for the comment back!
DeleteHi Taheesha!,
ReplyDeleteWow! You have a interesting and enjoyable poem to read. It looks like you have put a lot of effort into this poem. Your poem really rhymes which is great. I like how you have explained what you did for this Summer Learning Journey activity. If you had the chance to walk on the moon, would you?
Awesome Work!
Kia Ora Taheesha! You've made a great start on the Summer Learning Journey, and I'm glad to see you taking part in the programme for the first time. You did really good on this poem and made it rhyme. I liked the picture as well, although it's small, attribution goes a long way. If you could take one other person with you to the moon, who would it be and why?
ReplyDeleteHi Taheesha,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described how you felt, and what you did on the moon with lots of detail. I found it interesting that you felt swag after putting a flag down. If you could actually go to the moon would you want to?
Hey Taheesha!
ReplyDeleteI like the poem you did as it was clearly detailed and it was interesting. WOuld you like to go to the moon one day?
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